Tuesday, December 22, 2009

The Black (Female) Body in Hollywood


Last month I had the opportunity to attend a book release party for a new anthology, The Black Body, edited by Meri Nana-Ama Danquah. The collection of essays and poems explores the idea of what it means to have, or to love, a black body. Danquah assembled thirty black, white and biracial contributors to “take on the challenge of interpreting the black body’s dramatic role in American culture.” The book was robust and provocative and left me contemplating how the black body--specifically the black female body--takes up room in the entertainment machine we call Hollywood. Hollywood - the land of make-believe and glamour – is largely responsible for what we define as beautiful, desirable or sexy in this country.

Recently I was on Rodeo Drive and saw reality star Kim Kardashian (Keeping Up with the Kardashians) in the flesh. I’m aware that she is not black, but follow along anyway. She is the poster girl for “curvy” in these parts. What struck me first was how small she is. Small as in height; even with the six-inch heels it is clear she is barely 5’3”. But she is also small in frame; my guess is she is probably a size 4. Her infamous butt is, well, a butt. There is no denying she has junk in her trunk, but the trunk belongs to a Mini Cooper as opposed to a Ford Taurus. But she, along with a handful of other actresses, has become the anemic measuring stick that is a fraudulent example of “real” bodies in L.A.

Every month a new starlet is dubbed the “It Girl”; magazines run shiny pictorials to support the proclamation. On the rare occasions when a black actress is sprinkled with “It Girl” fairy dust (I think Halle Berry has been our token forever) there are a series of predictable adjectives that are trotted out to describe her. She is sassy, strong, serious, sexy, steely (yes, I am going for serial alliteration) and intense (that one is used for Angela Bassett). And when her body is described the word “curvy” is always on the top of the list. There is nothing wrong with being curvy, except it is the Hollywood euphemism of saying “bigger than a size 2.” In the world outside of L.A. Gabriel Union, Nia Long and Halle Berry would have ham sandwiches forced on them on a regular basis--but those actresses do not inhabit our world. For them to compete for time on the silver screen they must take on all the markers (long weaves, extreme diets, tiny bodies) of their white counterparts. They simply become tea-stained Barbie dolls.
The discussion of how women’s bodies are perceived in Hollywood is one that is age-old. But with the introduction of Gabourey “Gabby” Sidibe in the starring role of Precious, I think there is an opportunity to have a more honest dialogue and to see if Hollywood is ready to embrace a real big girl.

In 2006, Jennifer Hudson was the sassy, big It Girl. She had an extraordinary award show run that ended with a Best Supporting Actress Oscar. Every time she showed up on the red carpet, the words “curvy” and “voluptuous” weren’t too far behind. In reality the big girls in the rest of the country couldn’t help laughing. On her biggest day Jennifer Hudson was a size 16, but more likely usually a 14. What was the big deal? She didn’t look any different than the girl that lived next door.

Well, this award season is being dominated by one Gabourey Sidibe and there is no doubt, tipping the scale at 300 pounds, that she is an authentic big girl. But what is interesting is how the discussion about Gabby’s body has been framed in the context of her alter ego Precious. It’s as if they don’t share the same body. In the litany of reviews the word “obese” is flung around liberally as they describe her character, Clareece Precious Jones, but in interviews with Gabby the writers consistently remarks how “different” she is from the character she portrays in the blistering movie. The difference is her bubbly personality, her Valley Girl voice, the sense that she has somehow escaped the cruelty of adolescence. But most critics don’t take the honest next step and say what is the same: her weight. Interview after interview, she is filling out every square inch of her sized-for-her designer dress. She is taking up every square inch of the chair that is provided for her during the press junket. But no one dares speaks it. Is it because there is legitimate concern that Gabby truly is obese? That they see nothing attractive about her (which I think is absolutely not true)? Or that there is no language in the Hollywood lexicon to describe her? To say she is “curvy” or “voluptuous” (in Hollywood-speak) would be dishonest. So it is simply ignored.

And that is a shame. In many ways Gabby is breaking new ground for actresses larger than a size 22. She is the perfect example: American filmgoers are ready to pay their money to see a woman that has not been created by the Hollywood starlet machine and may not necessarily be relegated to the character parts reserved for the not-so-beautiful or skinny people. The blogosphere has been on fire regarding this very topic. Bloggers have not been shy about talking about Gabby’s weight, but the discussions have taken disturbing turns. What starts out as a critique of Precious quickly devolves into screeds on Gabby’s weight and how it somehow diminishes her credible performance. The argument is that because she started out “fat” she is not really acting. Really?

With that kind of illogical and unfair criticism I can’t help but wonder what is next for her. Will she go the way of Hattie McDaniel or will Hollywood loosen its belt and make room for a remarkable new talent that couldn’t find a size 24 dress on Rodeo Drive to save her life?

Thursday, December 3, 2009

Kellie Griffin: A Week with TV Comedy Writers


Kellie Griffin has a great laugh and a thing for dog parks. Kellie is also a comedy writer. In the business for nine years, she has worked on The Parkers and recently as head writer on House of Payne - but don’t hold that against her.

Kellie’s newest project, a half hour, multi camera sitcom, based on a real life experience, is one that puts her in the “creator” seat. I can’t exactly tell you what the show is about because I’ve signed a confidentiality agreement and I am not in the mood to be sued. But after spending a week with Kellie and her team of writers, I can tell you the story is funny, clever, and takes a lot of smart folks to pull off.

Kellie was gracious enough to let me sit in on a few writing sessions as she raced toward a deadline to complete five new scripts for her executive producer.

Anatomy of a Writer's Room

First, let me say that comedy writing is an endurance sport. By the end of a long day you are wrung out and punch drunk. Kellie and her team of five writers spend a minimum of six hours hammering out storylines, punch lines, and logic issues. As head writer/creator, she is the captain of the ship and responsible for encouraging fresh ideas, positive energy, and producing a finished product.

Generally each writer is assigned a script after the team has decided on each story and beat out all the scenes that should appear in the outline. Once the assigned writer has written the script it is brought back into the writer’s room and the staff deconstructs each scene and assist in rewriting.

Kellie says that new writers who are exposed to this team approach can struggle during this rewrite free-for-all. But she encourages them to trust the process and know that the team is only trying to create the best possible story. Because it is a collaborative process involving writers, studio heads, network heads, and actors sometimes the script you submitted is not exactly the same one that is shot — so don’t be sensitive. Besides in the end only your name will appear on the final product.

When Kellie starts pulling together a stellar team, diversity is imperative. Of first order is bringing together folks who will gel. When you are spending that much time together it is best that the right personalities share the same space. It is also important to have writers from various walks of life: married, single, film school graduates, self taught, Black, Asian, men, women. Head writers are also striving for balance when it comes to funny and finesse. Pairing writers who can fire off a joke every thirty seconds with writers who can track down the right flow to the story makes for good television.

Once you get everyone into the writers room, there are do’s and don’ts. Pitching (suggesting an idea for the script) is encouraged while trying to dominate the entire process is not. Be on time and stay off your cell phone. Be respectful of other writers’ work and don’t take yourself too seriously. It is all about creating a fun and productive space.

Anatomy of a Comedy Script

The average comedy script is made up of two acts, 8 scenes, a teaser, a tag and approximately 38 pages. Each page equals about 30 seconds of screen time, which produces a show that runs a little under 20 minutes. Commercials make up the difference, although Kellie says air time for television shows is being shortened to make room for more commercials. The first 4-5 pages is the teaser, which sets up the A/B story that will run through the show for the remainder. The first act sets up all the characters and ends with a cliff hanger at the act break(approximately page 20). The second act is riddled with conflict until about page 37, where a happy ending magically appears, and the show is wrapped with a tag on page 38.

In designing these scripts, efficiency is the key. Once the writers get through a massive game of word association to flesh out backstories and depth for the characters, they are always mindful that there are no throwaway lines or fillers. Scenes are tightly packed, driving toward a solution, button, or joke. The primary rule seems to be "end on a joke." And just because the joke made you laugh doesn’t mean it will survive the rewrite. Funny can be trumped by hilarious in a flash.

The Finish Line

Once the scripts are written and rewritten the team takes one more pass before releasing them. It appears the objective is to cut any “fat” that might slow down the story or jokes.

The danger here is the writers might be tempted to go back into the story and try to “make it better.” The head writer usually steps in and makes sure only the housekeeping gets taken care of and then the team is on to the next script (and the process starts all over again).

And that is the life of a comedy writer working on weekly show.

Kellie's Tips for new writers trying to break in

1. Sit in a writer's room. There is no classroom or book education that can replace that experience.

2. Be a sponge — talk to other writers, take classes and seminars, read articles and books on writing and the business of writing.

3. Watch a lot of television. You will need to write a spec script to get on a show you will have to watch enough of that particular show to get a sense of the “voice” and character arcs.

4. Keep writing — writers write. If you are not writing, you are not a writer. (Or at the very least you are not adding to the portfolio which proves that you are serious about writing!)

Michelle